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The girl was dead
Unwilling to believe
She was still breathing air for free
He was wrong, and they were right
We've lost a child, She lost her fight
But they couldn't assume
That she still lived and breathes
That's so pointless, and we all know it.
Her cold palms and shut eyes
Maybe finding peace tonight thinking,
"What's left of a cheery smile."
If it's a rotted corpse you're in denial
He reminded her
She could only smile
Unwilling to believe
She was still breathing air for free
He was wrong, and they were right
We've lost a child, She lost her fight
But they couldn't assume
That she still lived and breathes
That's so pointless, and we all know it.
Her cold palms and shut eyes
Maybe finding peace tonight thinking,
"What's left of a cheery smile."
If it's a rotted corpse you're in denial
He reminded her
She could only smile
How: Read it forward once (it should be negative)
then read it backwards, line by line, NOT word by word! (this should seem more positive).
i wanted to write a poem where it was death one way, but life the other way :3
then read it backwards, line by line, NOT word by word! (this should seem more positive).
i wanted to write a poem where it was death one way, but life the other way :3
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I love this! It's very creative the way you wrote down and then back up. How'd you do that?